"Click here if you are using this Persona to apply for usage in the Velvet Room (don't if you're not, or creating this for public use, or using it for a webpage! This is strictly when you are submitting to use a persona, as this requires your name and current lvl)"
Because what it seems to be saying is that you're only supposed to click the box if you're creating the Persona for general Velvet Room purposes, which actually isn't true. It could be a lot shorter, honestly, because all it boils down to is:
"Click here if you are creating a Soul Persona for your character's personal use. Fill in your character's name and DW journal name in the first two boxes. Your character's Persona is lv 1 unless they had one before coming to the game, in which case it is lv 2."
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"Click here if you are using this Persona to apply for usage in the Velvet Room (don't if you're not, or creating this for public use, or using it for a webpage! This is strictly when you are submitting to use a persona, as this requires your name and current lvl)"
Because what it seems to be saying is that you're only supposed to click the box if you're creating the Persona for general Velvet Room purposes, which actually isn't true. It could be a lot shorter, honestly, because all it boils down to is:
"Click here if you are creating a Soul Persona for your character's personal use. Fill in your character's name and DW journal name in the first two boxes. Your character's Persona is lv 1 unless they had one before coming to the game, in which case it is lv 2."
Or something of the sort.